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[Blazemane]

Hello. I had posted a story on this thread some years back, so allow me to explain at least a little bit why it isn't here anymore. For a long time--in my writing of fan fiction and in my watching, reading and general consideration of a number of different shows, books and other forms of stories--I had been sinning and making my temptation towards these sins ever greater. I have been done with writing fan fiction since mid-2014, but I have since realized that I need to go one more step and take these stories down, so that they're isn't this sort of contingency in play where I can tell myself, "well, maybe one day everything will be fine, and I'll be able to go back to those stories." That is still temptation. That is still my looking to these stories, even if I'm not in the process of writing. I have to let my idols--and the temptations to which they lead--go.

[Alak]

Sorry for the late feedback, but this is a pretty good story. I'm thinking about writing a WFC-based fanfic just to get it out of my system, but I haven't written anything other than analysis and critique papers for so long that I had writer's block. So, I decided to take a look around and I think this sort of inspired me lol. I especially like the interaction between Rattrap and Swiftfang near the end.

[Blazemane]

Hey, thanks for reading! This story is kinda' long after all.

[Dalgaroth]

That was quite the interesting read and well written. n_n It read a lot like an episode and everyone was very IC! The one thing I was let scratching my head about was why Tarantulas's reprogramming hadn't worked if he got there in time (The only thing missing is an explanation. OTherwise, that little surprise rocked.), and why he's giggling to himself at the end about a plan that wasn't apparently hinted at in the rest of it (unless the fact that Megatron had tried hailing him 3 times already in the beginning was the clue?). I was a bit confused. n.n But other than that, great job!

[Blazemane]

Thanks for the reply!

Yeah, the Swiftfang thing is not explained at this point in the story. But the story does get around to it.

[Dalgaroth]

Oh, okay, I thought that might be the reason. n.n

You're welcome!