Love or Hate part 4

[starshadow]

Author's note: Hurray!!I'm almost near to the final chapter of my series yessss....Warning: there's vulgarities.
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Rampage touched the part where Starshadow kissed,
"I've never been kissed before..."thought Rampage.

Nest day, at the maximal's base,
"Starshadow, I.."Starshadow ignored Depthcharge.
Depthcharge grabbed her arm.All the maximals were watching the two quarelling.
"WILL YOU JUST LISTEN TO ME FOR ONCE?!"
"WHY SHOULD I?"
"BECAUSE I..I..."
"OH, YOU WANT TO APOLOGIZE ME? IT'S TOO LATE! I'M AN UGLY SLAGGING FREAK TO YOU AND YOU SYMPATHIZE ME.AM I RIGHT?"
Depthcharge lost his patience and blows his top"JUST LISTEN TO ME YOU UGLY, FREAKING, SLAGGING, BITCH!!!"
After he realised what he had said, Starshadow burst into tears and walked out of the entrance.
"Ya did 'da wrong move fish face..."sighed Rattrap.
Rhinox tried to track her but failed.
"Slag! She used a signature blocker.I can't track her."

At the plains, sunset,
"Am I too far away from the base?" wondered Starshadow
"The further away from here the better.That place is a nightmare..."
Then she found a cave and sat in there, looking and listening to music box like-necklace that her parents gave her.The melodious song played calmed the panther down.

Night, full moon, Starshadow was walking across the plain towards the jungle,
She climbed onto a tree and look at the bright moon and sang a song.
Suddenly, she heard some familiar voices called her name.She used her wings to camoflage herself with the shadows with the tree leaves.
It was Depthcharge and his mutt."sighed Starshadow softly.

Warning, Protoform X detected at Vector 6-0-1
Rampage appeared infront of him.
"X!!!"
"My old friend..just quit searching for her.She doesn't want to see you anyway."
Starshadow listened to their conversation.
"I don't know what are you talking about."
"Stop denying! I've heard everything even you came with your stupid mechanic dog."
"JUST SHUT UP X!"
"I know how you feel for her..and it's love."
"SHUT UP!!!"and Depthcharge threw his tail spear at Rampage.
Starshadow came infront of Rampage to defend him and the spear went through her stomach.Mech fluid flowed out, and then she fainted.
"NOOOOOOO!!!"screamed Depthcharge.
Rampage looked horrified and ran off.
Depthcharge carried her and ran back to the base.

Maximal's base,
The entrance door burst open.
"RHINOX! SAVE HER!"the mech fluid stained his hands.
He gently put her on the lab table.
"What's her status?"asked Optimus.
"Her CPU is damaged, few of her systems contain minor damage which isn't a problem but the her core conciousness is damaged.Abit of a big problem."
"We'll just have to wait."
4 Mega-Cycles later,
"Well?"asked Optimus.
Rhinox shook his head.
"Can we see her?"asked Cheetor.
"She's in the ICU."

[Tor]

Depthcharge lost his patience and blew up his top"JUST LISTEN TO ME YOU UGLY, FREAKING, SLAGGING, BITCHY SAURIAN!!!"

Hey Starshadow!

Just a quick note: A Saurian isn't exactly an insult. It means that something belongs to a group of reptiles, or that something resembles a lizard. And I know Starshadow is a panther.^^ Just wanted to let you know.

DT

[starshadow]

oh! OMG A MISTAKE IN MAH STORY!!! muz edit thanks for da tip! I don't know BW and science language that much

[Tor]

No trouble really.

Well I look out for more about Starshadow's events in Beast Wars.

DT

[starshadow]

ATTENTION ALL READERS :

Depthcharge lost his patience and blew up his top"JUST LISTEN TO ME YOU UGLY, FREAKING, SLAGGING, BITCHY SAURIAN!!!"

that was a mistake from my previous story but I edit it in time. pls read it and comment.

[Aesir]

ATTENTION ALL READERS :

Depthcharge lost his patience and blew up his top"JUST LISTEN TO ME YOU UGLY, FREAKING, SLAGGING, BITCHY SAURIAN!!!"

that was a mistake from my previous story but I edit it in time. pls read it and comment.

Perhaps:
Depthcharge loses his patience and blows his top, "You listen here you ugly, freak of a Kitty, stop bitching and start helping, or else!" He draws his gun up to her chest

[starshadow]

LOL AESIR! GOOD DIALOGUE THERE I LAUGHED ALOT AHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHA

[Aesir]

LOL AESIR! GOOD DIALOGUE THERE I LAUGHED ALOT AHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHA

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