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[Tor]

Hey people,

I know I should look through the thread for this answer, but if Triassicus was a triceratops his pre-BW name could be Triton. Just a thought.

I got one of my characters figured out. Sazzafrazz, a sweet-tempered femme who has one big HUGE problem: short-term memory loss! *looks around ands sees no one laughing* What? I thought it was funny. When ever a stasis pod crashes, the new tf as NO memory of its past, so why not take it to the next level?

Tell me what ya think of Sazzafrazz PLEASE.

ttfn,
tor

[SkyxDB]

Triassicus is a Compy. If you don't know what that it, a compy is one of those tiny green dinosaurs with the long necks that appeared in the Jurassic Park movies.

Also to me, Sazzafrazz sounds like a TF version of Dori from Finding Nemo. XD

[Tor]

Hey People,

Umm I am so ashamed to say dis but.... I haven't seen Jurassic Park *sniff* tragic, I know.

And now that I think of it, yes she is! Maybe at some point she'll sing that swimming song:

When life gets you down, ya know what ya gotta do?
Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, swimming
What do we do? We swim!
WHEEEN you want to swim you want to swim!

Teehee. I love dat song.

Anyways thanks for the critique and i'll catch you kool kats later!
tor

[SkyxDB]

That would probaly work if she has an aquatic animal for her beast mode.

[artemis-lady-warrior]

Short term memory loss? BWAHAHAHHAA! That's great! I would love to see that!

[Jagna]

Indeed, Tor! I wish I'd thought of that! She sounds like she'd make an excellent comic character.....or just a very annoying, forgetful one

Back to designing OCs...I find faces quite hard....Jagna was my first ever OC.....it took me years to finalise her! O_o

[Tor]

Hey People!

Lady Artemis Warrior, I'm tickled pink dat you like da idea In fact, today I worked on a new series based on some newcomers and Sazzafrazz is a key character. Lemme give you a sneak peak of a conversation between of Bruce (standing for BRUte forCE) and Sazzafrazz:

"You're a Maximal?"

"An animal? You bet'cha." She grinned up at me, no hint of sarcasm, just innocence.

"No." I said sounding out the word for her, "Max-i-mal."

"Is that a club or something?" she tilted her head to one side.

"No a faction...."

"Fact wat?"

"A Maximal is a part of a faction." I threw my hands up in exasperation.

"What's that?"

"What?"

"A Maximal." Still no sacrasm in her tone.

"I just told you."

"Just told me what?" her visor bunched in the middle, expression clearly confused.

"What a Maximal is."

"An animal? I think I'm one of those."

I slapped forehead, leaving a dent in my helmet.

*End of Sneak Peek*

So it's flawed and needs a lot of work, but I'll revise it later. I thought it was funny, but that could be because its 11:30pm in my time. *yawn*

But please tell me your opinions. Input is wat keeps fanfic authors motivated.

Nighty night folks,
tor

[SkyxDB]

Jagna wrote

Jagna was my first ever OC.....it took me years to finalise her! O_o

Dang, well at leats I'm not the only one who has that problem. I have an OC that's not really assiocated with any fandom. I created her over a year agao and i'm still having trouble coming up with story for her.

And Tor you OC seems really funny. Man, the other Maximals would probably be so annoyed with her. I'm interested in knowing how Optimus would deal with a Maxi that has a short term memory problem.

So does anyone else have like theme songs picked out for thier OCs?

[Tor]

Hey People!

Like i said before, Dory's Just Keep Swimming song is just perfect for Sazzafrazz.

And I'm soo0o0o0oo glad you like her. I'm beginning to get quite attached to my little OCs.

Weeell I prob should go to bed... maybe one more post...
tor

[artemis-lady-warrior]

Don't worry SkyxDB we have bots like that. Chromia has no fraction either. She is just an earth bot I created for ANOTHER mecha show but moved her to the TF section because I couldn't tihnk of a good story.

Tor. When you have the whole thing done let me know. I'd love to read it.

[Razorclaw]

Speaking of Chromia,I am currently using HER for a character who will appear in Animated season 3. And that character is *drumroll* General Strika!
Ok ok,I know almost everyone here probably HATES Beast Machines. Me,I only got to see the first four episodes,and they're ok I guess. The plot's a littlie thin though

The first time I ever saw Strika,I thought she was a male. Hey,it was a bad picture on Wikipedia for boot'n up cold! Anyway,when I read her profile,I sat there going "What the...that thing's a GIRL?!"

Her look's not too bad actualy. But the toy was(and still is) awful.

If you didn't like her in BM(Or if you did),just look at her now!
http://www.transformertoys.co.uk/img/ne ... strika.jpg

Awful isn't it? She reminds me of an oprah singer for some reason. And I HATE oprah. Dynammo always did too...

In my storyline Chromia is Pre-Strika...She's also Prowl's girlfriend,and it's HIS fault she ends up a hulking,surly,Decepticon general.

I shall post details later.

[Razorclaw]

Sazzafrazz sounds great! I I I think I'd like to voice her!

[Jagna]

Oh! Here's a question for you! Have you thought of any voice actors for your OCs?

There's one I've had in my head since his creation. For some reason, I can picture Chris Rock voicing my Maximal macaw, Spanner.

And this might sound strange, but I can picture a few of my friends voicing peepz like Nightshaft, Signia and Llamara. *shrug*

[SkyxDB]

I haven't thought of voice actors for my OCs. But I guess I might listen to different voices to figure who would work best with each character.

[artemis-lady-warrior]

Only Shadowstar. In my head she sounds like Raven from the Teen Titans. I don't get voices in my head for anyone else cuz the others haven't really gotten much work put into them, except Yume but she's a human.