It's a story I've been working on for awhile and I wanted to post this to see if anyone likes it enough for me to continue with it.
The idea started out as a couple of dreams I've had for a few nights, So I wrote it down in a notebook and left it until now. It's a Transformer story (Sorry if you thought it was a BW one!) I hope you enjoy it.
This is the first chapter.
Meet my Bodyguard
I’ve never been a fan of journals or secret diaries or anything like that.
I mean, if you put “KEEP OUT!” Or “Private” or even worse “This is my diary, PAWS OFF!” on a book or whatever, it’s like just inviting someone to read all your private thoughts and secrets. Oh sure, I’ve started a few diaries when I was 9 or 10 but they never lasted as they were always read by my older sister, Rebecca. So I stopped doing them.
But recently, I’ve come to know a big secret. A really BIG secret. Something that I can’t share with ANYONE. Not even Mum or Dad or Rebecca or any of my friends. If I told them, Mum and Dad would say it was my imagination again and Rebecca would laugh and tease me to no end.
My friends? I don’t think so.
But it’s really hard to keep, as secrets go. It’s nothing like keeping the name of your best mate’s crush a secret. It’s one of those…. well I’m not sure what you can call it but it’s big, Really Big.
That’s mostly why I’m writing this down, because I can’t tell anyone about it. So I figured, if I can’t talk about it, I could write about it and to stop anyone reading this, I could burn it or rip it up and flush it down the toilet.
Well, maybe.
So I’d better stop rambling and just write it down. Ok, here goes, I wouldn’t blame you if you don’t believe me but this is the truth.
My name is Maddi Jackson, I’m 15 years old and I live with my Mum and Dad in the old seaside town, Loweskye.
I have an older sister called Rebecca, who is at University, studying Music Technology.
Oh yes and my mobile is actually an alien robot from a planet called Cybertron.
Yeah, you heard the last part right, my mobile is an alien and he’s a robot. (And he has a gender.)
His name is Realtone and he also happens to be my bodyguard.
Hard to believe right? I didn’t believe it either and thought I was dreaming. But for me, it’s reality and my life would never be the same again.
Wow, that sounds like it could of come from a movie or something.
"Meet my Bodyguard"
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This is an interesting perspective to write a fiction from. I can only imagine how much fun it would be to read about her trying to keep it from people.
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