- Tied winner of
Best Tear-jerker 04
My
Last Breath
By: Lady Venom
What if Rattrap had arrived before the others? What if he was the one to hear the warriors' last words? What would he do? Evanescence owns My Last Breath, Hasbro owns the robots, and I own the plot.
Hold on to me love
You know I can't stay long
All I wanted to say was I love you and I'm not afraid
Can you hear me?
Can
you feel me in your arms?
Dinobot!
Rattrap frantically searched the clearing. Fires that once burned high had died
to embers, creating a mirage of heat waves. A movement caught his eye; two
protohumans were inspecting something. Quickening his pace, his fears were
confirmed when he saw light glinting off metal.
"Get away from him!" He screamed at the
protohumans.
Dropping
to his knees, Rattrap lifted Dinobot's head and cradled it in his lap.
"Yo,
Dinobot, ya hear me pal?"
His only
answer was a cough that racked the warriors' body.
Holding my last breath
Safe inside myself
Are all my thoughts of you
Sweet raptured light
It
ends here tonight
Leaning
down he hugged his friend.
"Come
on, you can pull through this...Dinobot?"
For a second the red eyes had closed, and Rattrap
thought he had lost him. But a soft voice floated up to him.
"Rattrap?"
His grip tightened on the taloned hand.
"Yea buddy. I'm right here."
Another cough, and Rattrap could feel the trembling
that followed.
"I'm...
sorry."
Trying to make him more comfortable, Rattrap laid
him back down, still holding his hand.
"Hey, eh, sorry for what?"
Gotta keep him talking! Gotta keep him on - line
till the others arrive!
"Sorry...
I won't have... the pleasure *cough* of scrapping you myself."
A grim
smile broke out on the Maximal's face, before dissolving into a coughing fit.
I'll miss the winter
A world of fragile things
Look for me in the white forest
Hiding
in a hollow tree (come find me)
He can't
leave me! He... he just can't!
"Then
I promise not to get scrapped until we meet again."
His body was badly damaged, and Rattrap knew that
this was one battle the warrior would not survive from. Cuts ran deep, like
lashes, across his face, and from one eye, mech fluid dripped. Making a silver
dot that ran like tears down his face.
"Dinobot?"
I know you can hear me
I can
taste it in your tears
Dinobot smiled at his friend, a rare sight saved
only for those he admired. He could hear the others off in the distance. And he
found it odd that even though he was dying his senses seemed to have heightened
three-fold. Reaching up, he pulled Rattrap towards him. So close their noses
almost touched.
"Promise
me one thing rodent."
Holding my last breath
Safe inside myself
Are all my thoughts of you
Sweet
raptured light it ends here tonight
"Anything."
His eyes
sought out the raptors own.
"Don't ever change."
The
others had landed; he could hear Optimus talking to the others. But they were
invisible to the two robots holding hands; lost in their own world of torture.
Dinobot gripped Rattrap's hand tighter, it seemed to be the only thing still
holding him to this world.
Closing your eyes to disappear
You pray your dreams will leave you here
But still you wake and know the truth
No
one's there
Rattrap
listened to Dinobot, talking to Optimus. Asking for his story to be told in
earnest. In truth.
Truth.
Truth is that I won't ever find another friend like you. Truth, it seems, means
that everyone I cared about have become casualties of this stinkin' war. Rattrap
looked into the fading light of Dinobots eyes, and felt his hand go slack.
Truth is
that you're dying, and I can't save you. Truth is that, without you, I'm lost.
Say goodbye
Don't be afraid
Calling
me calling me as you fade to black
~Fin~