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Spectre's Beginning part 2

Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:30 pm
by starshadow
Author's note:okok,Zira is Starshadow's grandmother lol and i think i've used too much dialogue.IM SUCH A BAD STORY WRITER!! anyway,starshade is a black panther with angel like wings(feathers) :shock: :o
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"ugh..steering this ship isn't going to be easy as it was damaged by the slagging cops.ARGH! ITS USELESS I CAN'T LAND THIS SHIP",shouted Starshadow as she banged on the computer.
"This is..What the?AHHHHH!!What's happening to me??My head AHHH!!" Starshadow rushes off to get to her pod and eject it out of the ship.

In a midst of a battle between the maximals and predacons,
"Bigbot, I think I saw something burning from the sky"shouted Cheetor.
"What did you see?"asked the Maximal commander.
"I think is a battle ship and..HEY! A stasis just came out from that ship!"exclaimed Cheetor.
Optimus said,"Cheetor,Depthcharge, go investigate the area where the ship and the stasis pod is landing.Rhinox, Rattrap, Silverbolt, Blackarachnia and I will handle the predacons"

"RAMPAGE, WASPINATOR! GET THE STASIS POD!!"bellowed Megatron.

In the Forest,
"WOAH! Sure is pretty for a battle ship. Especially branded with a big mean looking fang printed marks on the wings."joked Cheetor.
"Never joke on this ship Cheetor.Its the ship of Zira, The Lunatia Battleship.We better get the stasis pod back to base."said Depthcharge.
"You are not going anywhere with the pod",as Rampage appears.
He knocked out the two transmetal bots with missles and took the pod back to the predacon's base.

Maximals base,
"We lost the pod Bigbot."said Cheetor disappointed.
"Don't worry Cheetor,because we have another recruit to introduce to you."said Optimus.
Cheetor looking confused,
"Meet Starshade,the other two pods didn't survive the crash."
Starshade said,"HELLO BOYS, name's Starshade."

While at the Predacon's base,
"TRY TO OPEN THE POD YOU FOOLS!"shouted Megatron.
Waspinator,Rampage and TM2 Dinobot tried to open it but it won't budge.
Suddenly,a loud bang was heard outside of the pod.
"This is no ordinary pod. Its all pitch black and marked with a fang symbol on it."said Dinobot with anger.
BANG!A dent was made on the pod.
BANG! BANG! BANG! And the pod's lid was open with white smoke coming out.
And then, a vampire winged black panther with a glowing devil tail came out roaring madly,it's spark has become feral.
"I AM STARSHADOW! LET THE HAUNT BEGIN"roared Starshadow.

End of Spectre's Beginning

Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2009 11:49 pm
by Tor
Hey there,

Its a good first stab at writing your beginning. No sweat though... it took me forever to try and come up with a way for my OC to get into the beast wars. A for effort!

DT

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 12:02 am
by starshadow
WOW AWW THX TOR^W^ cuz that's the first time i get an A in a fanfic LOL :D i was jumping on my bro's bed happily saying YESS YESS YESS OHHH YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS^^

Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:19 am
by Tor
No problemo!

And I understand the difficulty of making a fic, so you deserve the 'A' ^^

DT