Contest Submission Teaser

[Razorclaw]

I'm submitting a fanfic to this year's "Mystery Fanfic" chalange,right here on BWINT.net. Here's a short teaser of what you will see:
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Evening had begun on Cybertron. The day’s events had slowly come to a lull, and everything was slowing down. The occasional Maximal or Predacon would walk the streets, but that was about it. Only drunks and travelers were typically active at this hour.

Drunks, travelers, and criminals.

The Solar City Museum was one of the greatest wonders of its day. Located at the center of one of the most populated and industrious cities on Cybertron, it was home to over five-hundred-billion artifacts, history records, and models. It was about to lose one of its most precious tresures.
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Please let me know what you think. I may add a little more,as long as it doesn't give away too much.

[Tor]

RC,

SPILL!!! TELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELLTELL!!!!!

-dinotor

[Razorclaw]

This is probably a bad idea...but,ok. I warn you though,as much as you may beg me, I cannot afford to give away any more information,or the title of the story,because both would give too much away.
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Outside one of the back entrances, there were signs of a struggle. All security devices had been damaged beyond use, and the guards had been knocked out.

Inside the museum, three figures, silhouetted in the wavy light of Cybertron’s moons, stole quietly through the various sections. Reaching the center, where only the most precious of artifacts were kept, they stood together, in the light of a small lantern, discussing their plans.

“Now,” said the one who seemed to be in charge, in a deep, bass voice,”once the lock has been broken, I shall make my way inside the chamber, and take the Golden disc. You two will wait outside, as backup, yesss, until I return. Then we will meet up with Skorponok and the others, take the ship, and fulfill our destinies!”

“But what of the Maximals?” snarled another voice, that had an extreme gravel. “Surely you realize they will discover the disappearance before we take off.”

“I have already taken that into consideration,” replied the first voice. “If they make any attempt to follow, it will be futile. Recall that we are taking one of the fastest ships in their fleet.”
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[Tor]

Oh hoo!

I tink I can see where dis is going! *trembles wid excitement*

-dinotor

[Sapphire]

*jumps at opportunity to wave flag for competition* We totally need more entries, so if you're a writer and inspired, do send along your grand mystery adventure fic like this fine person and make the competition awesome due to a good participation level.

[Blazemane]

Very interesting RazorClaw. I'm messing with the same thing in my fan fiction (not contest entry, this is something that's been going on for a while).

It will be interesting to see your perspective on this.