Comfort's Patience

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Comfort's Patience

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Hey

Well I made another short scene from my Outsiders series. This one is about Comfort, the medic of da group, and 'Frazz.

Either you love it or ya hate it. Review Please!

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Comfort carefully plugged the wire to link the Stasis Pod to the homemade Energon recycler. Then to switch the main function program to a CR compatible format. If she could just get the signal through...

"Hiya!"

Zzzp!

The pod's system locked and shut down.

Comfort sighed. She'd have to reboot the system and reconfigure the system. Again.

"Oops," Sazzafrazz giggled as the pod's wires sparked and caught on fire.

Comfort clapped her hands together and they formed an nozzle that sprayed a snow white foam, dousing the flames.

"Hi, 'Frazz," Comfort smiled wearily.

"Hi.... Moose-girl."

Comfort rubbed her temples slowly, "Its Comfort, remember?"

"Nope," Sazzafrazz said cheerfully.

"Well, just call me Comfort, okay?"

"Okay."

"You don't remember anything I just said, do you?"

"Nope," Sazzafrazz smiled and gazed blankly up into the sky.

"So, do you need something?" Comfort gently lead Sazzafrazz toward AV's 'quarters'.

"I think so..."

Comfort sighed again. It was a good thing she was a patient creature, "Alright, let's go find AV."

"Who?" Sazzafrazz's brow furrowed in confusion.

"Don't worry, 'Frazz, you'll remember in a little."

"Thanks, Comfort."

"You remembered my name!" Comfort squeaked in surprised.

"Isn't it Comfort?"

Comfort smiled gently, "Yeah, it is."
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Brilliant! You capture the characters so well! :D If there was an icon on this forum that applauded,I'd post it in a nanoclick!

*****:5/5 stars!
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RC!

Tanks for reviewin it! And for five star. WARM FUZZIES!! :) I really like dis scene cuz it shows da beginnin of Comfort's and 'Frazz's friendship. *happy sigh*

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