Sazzafrazz: The Dory of the Beast Wars
Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 2:44 am
Hey People!
Lately I've been working on a series, the title is yet to be decided (meaning I can't sum up da story in a cool sounding phrase), and I just wanted to post dis to get some feed back. *note: I did post dis conversation on another thread
Bruce (which stands for BRUte forCE) meets Sazzafrazz.
"You're a Maximal?"
"An animal? You bet'cha." She grinned up at me, no hint of sarcasm, just innocence.
"No." I said sounding out the word for her, "Max-i-mal."
"Is that a club or something?" she tilted her head to one side.
"No a faction...."
"Fact-what?"
"A Maximal is a part of a faction." I threw my hands up in exasperation.
"What's that?"
"What?"
"A Maximal." Still no sacrasm in her tone.
"I just told you."
"Just told me what?" her visor bunched in the middle, expression clearly confused.
"What a Maximal is."
"An animal? I think I'm one of those."
I smacked forehead, leaving a dent in my helmet.
*End of conversation*
Well dere it is. Please o please gimme your feedback!
Th-th-th-that's all folks,
tor
Lately I've been working on a series, the title is yet to be decided (meaning I can't sum up da story in a cool sounding phrase), and I just wanted to post dis to get some feed back. *note: I did post dis conversation on another thread
Bruce (which stands for BRUte forCE) meets Sazzafrazz.
"You're a Maximal?"
"An animal? You bet'cha." She grinned up at me, no hint of sarcasm, just innocence.
"No." I said sounding out the word for her, "Max-i-mal."
"Is that a club or something?" she tilted her head to one side.
"No a faction...."
"Fact-what?"
"A Maximal is a part of a faction." I threw my hands up in exasperation.
"What's that?"
"What?"
"A Maximal." Still no sacrasm in her tone.
"I just told you."
"Just told me what?" her visor bunched in the middle, expression clearly confused.
"What a Maximal is."
"An animal? I think I'm one of those."
I smacked forehead, leaving a dent in my helmet.
*End of conversation*
Well dere it is. Please o please gimme your feedback!
Th-th-th-that's all folks,
tor