((OOC: Finally! I'm finished! I want to know what you guys think about this new and improved (
) profile of Whitegrazer! I'm a bit iffy on her abilities still, even though, at least the fit the character better than what I had. They might be too powerful for the game, but I want to hear everyone's opinions.
Seriously, if things I need to fix, change, or explain better, let me know. Also, I forgot how many weapons/abilities we are allowed to have, especially for a transmetal 2 or a variant of it. Maybe I should also change her function. She seems to go farther, farther away from the soldier type to a mystical type of character.))
Name: Whitegrazer
Allegiance: Maximal
Function: Soldier, Instructor
Alt. Mode: Transmetal 2 Andalusian Horse
Height: 3.05 m
Quote: "Don't kill if you can wound, don't wound if you can subdue, don't subdue if you can pacify, and don't raise your hand at all until you've first extended it. "
Strength: 9
Intelligence: 7
Speed: 6
Endurance: 9
Rank: 7
Courage: 7
Firepower: 4
Skill: 8
Biography:
When Optimus Prime showered the pure energy of the Matrix within the Swarm, the Vok and "Whitegrazer" were born. Her Vok name is undefinable and unknowable except by the Vok themselves. To show their gratitude and begin the road of redemption and healing, they introduced protoform technology to the Cybertronian race as a way to help conserve their energy resources, but the Vok's other reason was to help downsized the titans as the Autobots and Decepticons massive size were detrimental to an universe full more with organic rather than machine-like races. This led to the creation of the Autobot and Decepticon's descendants, the Maximals and Predacons. After this, the Vok bid Optimus Prime and the others farewell. They traveled to the far reaches of the galaxy untouched and unknowable towards the sentient races of the galaxy. A powerful being called to them, leading them to a nebula, a home for the omnipotent being for which they called The One, and named it Nexus Zero. From Nexus Zero, they began, meticulously and ruthlessly, establishing sites across the galaxy, especially on the worlds like Earth and Jihax, worlds they had severely devastated when they were the Swarm, to help the races in the past better prepare for their futures. That the Vok might be able to change what they had caused.
When the Maximals and Predacons began to start a war just like their ancestors, "Whitegrazer" implored her fellow Vok in intervening and stopping the war before it could destroy everything they had hoped to accomplish. The Vok were hesitant, but they remembered Optimus Prime's selfless actions. They agreed, but there were a couple of exceptions: "Whitegrazer" wasn't to engage in any combat, and she wasn't to choose sides. That she must see both sides objectively. The other Vok would remain in contact with her as they were all connected to one another.
"Whitegrazer" went to Cybertron and was greeted by the Maximal High Council of Elders. She asked them for a blank protoform pod, so she could have a Cybertronian form as her Vok form was too powerful and fered her appearance might cause any non-Vok to suffere massive spark failure. She was unfamiliar with the new factions' ideology and people, so the Maximal High Council of Elders explained how the Maximals wished for peace and unity while the Predacons wished for war and conquest. She remembered her people's conditions for her not to choose sides, even though her heart seemed to side withe the Maximals' plight and ideals, and told the Elders that she wished to set up an assembly with some Maximal dipolomats and asked the Predacon leaders to come and establish a dialogue. The Elders disapproved, but they assigned the diplomats and called the Predacon leaders. The assembly went horribly wrong. As "Whitegrazer" and the Maximal diplomats talked with the Predacons leaders, which turned out to be decoys, a bomb went off killing all the Maximal dipolomats who were with her and severly damaged her, leaving her to look around the corpses and the surrounding devastation. Her blood boiled at the Predacons' deception and cruelty. She took the Maximal Elders' offer of joining the war efforts. They bowed in appreciation, assigning her with General Warspark and his army around the colony worlds, but also, they asked for her to not reveal her true heritage towards those without high clearance. She agreed. The Vok disapproved of her disobedience.
"Whitegrazer" fought in many battles alongside General Warspark and his Maximal troops. It was during these battles that she began to experience the side effects of her taking a Cybertronian form. She began to form connections with the Maximals she fight alongside with and the Predacons she was fighting against. Swirls of intense emotions overwhelmed her senses. Every time a comrade died, she felt it. Every time she or another Maximal killed a Predacon, she felt their deaths too. She choose to ignore what she felt from others, which she didn't realize would make things worse in the long run.
The war took its toil on "Whitegrazer". After many battles against ruthless and sadistic Predacons, after she witnessed the flaws of Maximal ideology, watching her comrades behave with the same brutality and callousness as the Predacons they fought against, "Whitegrazer" developed a seething hatred and disgust towards both sides, not being able to tell the difference between the two, despite the fact she too participated in the same behaviors. This caused her to detach herself from the Maximals who she served and who served under her. General Warspark and other Maximals began to distrust her as well as her intentions, since she was an outsider. Predacons saw her as a freak and attempted to seize her own power, which she made them pay for. The Maximal Elders pressured her for a major victory, pressuring her to engage in more and more assaults, wanting the war to end quickly. She grew wary and irritated at the increasing demands the Maximal Elders wanted of her, feeling that she wasn't gaining any ground in her true purpose. Angry at being their lapdog, when it was she who should be giving the orders. That they should be listening to her instead of vice versa. It made it all too clear to her that they viewed her as just another tool. Many Predacon generals died by her hands, and it was made clear that the Predacons were losing ground. Orders were intercepted by Maximal agents that the Tripredicus Council ordered Predacon Wraith to attack the Maximal protoform colony at Planet Gaila, which they weren't able to prevent.
So the Maximal Elders ordered her, Warspark and the rest to go to Gaila. They asked for her to help in the rebuilding efforts and wanted her to create new protoforms. She complied, creating new protoforms for the Maximals. She viewed the protoforms as her own children, expressing a motherly instinct and protectiveness towards them. When the Predacons attacked close by the colony, Warspark ordered her to abandon the protoforms and helped them. She refused, at first, but the Maximal Elders threatened the protoforms' demise if she didn't cooperate. So she joined the battle against the Predacon Wraith and his soldiers. While they were occupied, a Tripredicus Council agent infilarated and destroyed "Whitegrazer" protoforms. She felt the cries of help from her protofoms, the scotching heat, and the deadly silence after. "Whitegrazer" couldn't handle the pain anymore. Using what strength she had and the suppressed angry and resentment towards the Maximals for using her, she squeezed and squeezed the sparks indiscriminately. Every Maximal and Predacon dropped dead holding their chest areas, looking at her with horror. The Vok severed their connection with her, leaving her with the sentence of exile.
She collapsed from the stain,falling in and out of consciousness, and was picked up by the Maximal medics, who were actually Maximal scientists in disguise. They collected samples of her spark. These samples would be used to conduct experiments which led to the creation of nanotechnology. The same technology inside Nemesis and Zodiac. "Whitegrazer" wouldn't be aware of this fact until later on.
Fully recovered, "Whitegrazer" was put on trial for the deaths of General Warspark and other Maximals. She was scheduled to be terminated, but the Maximal Elders changed their minds, for a reason "Whitegrazer" wasn't sure of. They released her with the serve consequence if she talked about her origins or what transpired here.
Exiled from her people, forced to become something she despised, "Whitegrazer" , for a time, wandered aimlessly. Still dealing with the side effects. After being beaten up by a group of Predacon thugs, not bothering to defend herself, TyCross found her, extending his hand to help her deal with her problems. She only accepted to get off of the sorry state she was in. TyCross introduced her to meditation techniques as well as a fighting style known as Diffusion. H also helped her gain a position at the Maximal Military Academy as an instructor. The techniques and fighting style helped ease her pain as well as control the other overwhelming sensations she dealt with. She gained a self-induced amnesia towards her Vok origins, wanting to forget how she was abandoned and also potect their secrets and knowledge. Due to this newfound serenity, "Whitegrazer" realized the errors of her ways and decided to renew her purpose in helping the Maximals and Predacons gain a new peace. Understood the Maximal Elders used her to help gain more power over the Maximals and Predacons and realized how corrupted Cyberton was within with such dirty dealings and experiments. She was grateful towards TyCross, but it was clear he didn't share her beliefs, telling her how futile her mission was.
She spent time making friends on both sides. Staging her own fights, helping whoever she could. It was during this time that TyCross was dying over mysterious circumstances. She greived for him, but it didn't last long when he could communicate with her beyond the grave.
The Maximal Elders contacted her for the first time since her conviction for an opportunity to join an exploration crew, led by Optimus Primal, on a special exploration mission. She suspected ulterior motives for their intriguing offer, and also she didn't want to abandon he work, and she declined, which the Elders and TyCross both expressed disappointment. TyCross told her that she needed this, that she needed to remember who she was, and needed to reach out and see what she was really refusing to see. "Whitegrazer" meditated over it, feeling an sense of longing, loneliness, and something greater than she thought would come of a simple exploration mission. She contacted the Elders and accepted their offer, placing herself in a stasis pod.
Weapons:
Whitegrazer doesn't come with weapons. If the need arises, she will procure her weapons on site or in the Axalon's armory.
Abilities:
Due to her Vok origins, Whitegrazer's empathetic abilities are drawn from that, and also, due to the incident at the Metal Hunter, Whitegazer's powers have increased.
Battle Meditation - an ability to considerably boosted the morale, stamina, and overall battle prowess of an individual's allies while simultaneously reducing the opposition's combat-effectiveness by eroding their will to fight. She can't engaged in the fighting. She has to be in the Axalon itself or out of fighting range in order to be affected. Takes an amount of concentration that can be broken by external or internal means.
Clairvoyant Healing - an ability which Whitegazer uses meditation and her connections to accelerate the natural healing process rapidly, and could be used to heal the most fatal of wounds and injuries for those she has bonded with. Anyone non-bonded can still be healed but by a lesser degree. Can't heal poisoned individuals. Takes an amount of concentration that can be broken by external or internal means.
Empathy - an ability to pick up impressions of an individual's feelings and general emotional state, especially makes Whitegazer adept in picking up motivations, hidden feelings, and even deeply guarded secrets.
Stealth - an ability to mask her entire presence from others. Can fool sensors, but any ninja or stealth type of character may be able to sense or spot her.
Deflection - an ability to deflect any projectiles coming towards her as well as shield others from them, though she has to be at close proximity towards the individual she hopes to defend. Brutal force can break through.
Weaknesses: Whitegrazer is more of a defensive rather than an offensive person. She wishes to talk and end fights by using reason and cooperation before any fighting starts. Enemies can take advantage of her good-natured personality if she can't see through their deception. Also, she is more worried about the safety of others rather than her own well-being, which could leave her to making suicidal runs, and due to her protective nature, she could leave herself open if she is too busy helping her comrades who need healing or anything else on the battlefield. Bonded or not bonded to her.
Just kidding, una, it's fine! But you do have "Weaknesses" listed twice. Need some strengths and to add her bio when you're ready.
But... I realized I have a plan now! I figured it all out! 
Instead of what was essential to the character and made her unique in the game. 
I always seem to get like this. Bad habits die hard, especially for me. 