Hmm, that's a good point about Depth Charge's proposed topic. I might do it anyway if I can't think of another topic for him. He doesn't like any of my silly ideas, but personally I'd like to hear him explain how jello works.
Okay, so I've got my third character short done just today. It's not Sunday yet, so it counts for this week! xD As a note, Donovan and Sterling are my own characters from my planned novel.
Character Short #3:
Donovan on the pretty-boy vampire fad
“I don’t understand this,” I said, and showed Sterling the magazine article I was reading.
The old man glanced at it. “I don’t understand why you’re looking at a teen magazine.”
What else was I supposed to do while we waited? He missed the point like usual. This was for his benefit anyway. I reckon he hasn’t had a haircut since World War II.
“Vampires don’t
sparkle.” I said. I ought to know.
“Vampires don’t go outside without bursting into flames, either.”
I ignored him. “And vampires don’t care about affairs with mortal women.”
“Says the guy courting a mortal woman with a five-year-old.”
The salon receptionist up front gave us an odd look. I leaned over. “We can just as easily do this at the dog groomers,” I said.
“Not unless you want to find presents in every pair of shoes you own.”
I straightened up. Maybe this wasn’t the best thing to do so close to the full moon. I returned to the magazine article. “It’s unrealistic. I guarantee you put a real vampire in front of a teenager, she’d never know he
was one. If she did, she’d run in the other direction.”
“Understandably.”
“Oh, like a werewolf is any more charming.”
“Some women like dogs.”
“You shed and wreck the wallpaper.”
“The former is unavoidable.” He turned his grey eyes on me. They had a tint of yellow. “I can arrange the latter.”
One thing I looked forward to after this haircut of his: He’d lose that wild presence he had all the time. Hopefully.
“Read this.” I gave him the magazine. “They’re giving the rest of us a bad name. We won’t be taken seriously again for at
least several decades. It might make finding prey easier, but where’s the fun in it if they’re already willing?”
He pushed it away. “I wouldn’t know.”
“Did you even read it?”
“I care not to.”
Wait. “
Can you read it?”
His shoulders tensed. “I recognize enough to get by.”
“And
how old are you?”
An attractive woman approached us. Sterling pulled the leather binding out of his hair and tossed his head to free up the grey and white ponytail. He’s seen too many Fabio commercials.
“Sterling? I’m Tina. Let’s get you ready.”
“Yes ma’am.” He followed her.
“What were you thinking of doing today?”
“My companion thinks I’m in need of looking more civilized.”
“He needs a shave, too,” I said. I watched his trench coat billow out as he moved forward. My next challenge: To revise his wardrobe.
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This is the first time I've written anything with these two. It's in a different format because I'm not 100% familiar with these people yet, and the only time I hear Donovan is when he's talking to Sterling. In case anyone's confused, Sterling has three forms: human, werewolf, and dog. It's.... complicated. Hence the "find presents in your shoes" line. Also, Donovan is supposed to be Cajun (he told me so himself) but I'm still learning what that means as far as dialogue and mannerisms. If anyone knows about that, please feel free to offer critical advice.
Do these characters sound distinct from each other? As readers are you interested in what's going on with these two? I'm curious.